Swedish Continuers 2023 HSC exam pack (archive)
2023 Swedish Continuers HSC exam papers (archived)
Swedish Continuers HSC Exam paper - transcript - audio 2023
Marking guidelines
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Use the feedback to guide preparation for future examinations. Feedback includes an overview of the qualities of better responses. Feedback may not be provided for every question.
Feedback on practical examination
Conversation
Students should:
- be prepared to communicate on a variety of topics relating to their personal world
- elaborate and provide relevant details to address the questions in a way that engages with the examiner
- express ideas and opinions that justify their point of view by providing depth and insight in their responses rather than only giving short pre-prepared responses
- elaborate using a variety of vocabulary, phrases and expressions suitable to the question asked
- use a range of tenses and be prepared to reflect on the past, present and future
- manipulate the language to fulfil the requirements of the question
- avoid the repetition of the same vocabulary, phrases, expressions and grammatical structures
- be prepared to be interrupted by the examiner
- use Swedish to ask for repetition and/or clarification of the question.
In better responses, students were able to:
- speak clearly with excellent pronunciation, syntax, register and intonation
- answer the questions with minimal hesitation, allowing the conversation to flow at a natural pace
- answer questions with relevant information and in some depth, for example, to communicate feelings, provide opinions and justify their responses
- address the requirements of the question
- elaborate on their responses without extra prompts from the examiner
- respond in full sentences, using compound and complex sentences
- use language structures and features effectively to enhance their responses
- demonstrate excellent knowledge of a wide repertoire of vocabulary such as words to talk about their future plans, for example, sabbatsår, lärling, praoa, utforska alternativ, tågluffa and education, NO-ämnen, textil, hemkunskap and hobbies, bergsklättring
- accurately use tenses as required by the question
- use authentic and idiomatic expressions appropriately, for example, det har bara klickat i mitt huvud, jag är en lång grabb.
Areas for students to improve include:
- avoiding the overuse of ‘filler words’ such as liksom and asså
- revising grammar features and structures such as prepositions, for example, på en liten säsong, i fritiden, på kassan; tenses with irregular verbs in the past villde and future tense när jag är äldre, and agreement of adjectives min bröder
- using ’false friends’ and direct translations, for example, högskolan vs högstadiet, se vs träffa, gå vs åka
- revising word order, for example, placement of inte and också in subordinate clauses BIFF-regeln
- differentiating between tror, och,tycker.
Discussion
In preparation for the Discussion
Students should:
- choose a topic that has good quality reference texts and sources available
- prepare for the discussion by referring to at least three texts in their research
- ensure that one of the texts used in their research is a literary source.
During the Discussion examination
Students should:
- support their discussion with evidence from the texts that they have sourced
- express and justify opinions and points of view on the in-depth study topic
- reflect on their research findings to help them express opinions or develop new perceptions about their in-depth topic
- manipulate language to respond in a coherent and logical way to the questions asked
- use a variety of relevant vocabulary, grammar, sentence structures and expressions
- avoid responding with pre-prepared responses that do not address the question asked
- avoid relying on general knowledge about the topic of in-depth study.
In better responses, students were able to:
- ensure that sources chosen were relevant to the topic of in-depth study
- compare the validity and reliability of their texts by discussion the level of objectivity of each text, for example, den ägs av staten och enligt lag måste den vara opartisk
- refer to their sources and comment on how each source contributed to their understanding of the in-depth topic
- discuss how their research impacted on their views and helped them gain a better understanding of the in-depth topic
- develop analytical approach to texts studied rather than memorise information from the texts
- provide logical and well-structured responses to questions
- draw insightful conclusions regarding issues raised in their research
- use specific vocabulary and expressions relating to the topic such as organisationsuppbyggnaden,klimatkris,nätverk, cirkulärt mode, gängkriminalitet, grundvatten and extremister
- use complex sentences and suitable idiomatic expressions to strengthen and support their opinions, for example, Jag känner en stark personlig koppling till vad personen har betytt, Den tar upp problemet på ett underhållande och tankeväckande sätt
- respond using a high level of grammatical accuracy, sophisticated vocabulary and expressions
- manipulate the language effectively to support their ideas and justify their point of view.
Areas for students to improve include:
- referring to their texts without being prompted.
- answering the question rather than responding with pre-prepared information
- having a critical approach to information in texts
- including different perspectives regarding the issues raised in the research.
Feedback on written examination
Listening and Responding
Students should:
- make notes in the Candidate’s Notes column on the right-hand side of the page
- read the question carefully and respond to all parts of the question
- support their responses with relevant evidence from the text
- transcribe their response on to the lines, using the space allocated beneath the question
- use the number of lines as an indication of the required length of the response
- support their responses with reference to relevant content and language, using their own words
- avoid translating the text as part of their response.
In better responses, students were able to:
- identify that the purpose of the text is to encourage/persuade people of all ages to book a holiday at Harpön camping (Q2a)
- identify the persuasive technique of encouraging people to book quickly to not miss out (Q2a)
- compare the two speakers’ perspectives and include both similarities and differences of views rather than just listing what each person said in the conversation (Q3b)
- identify both reasons for the teacher’s call, that is, to invite Daniel’s family to the end of year prize award and to deliver the exciting news that Daniel has won an academic prize (Q4a)
- identify and describe Louise’s feelings as being proud, happy, initially concerned and then relieved (Q4b)
- connect Loiuse’s feelings to changes in Daniel’s development and performance from being an unmotivated student to becoming an excellent student and mentor for others. For example, Louise är stolt, så glad, hon var orolig i början, han var så omotiverad I början … (Q4b)
- take a stance of how unlikely it is for Alexandra to get a lift and justifies this stance. For example, nätverket ligger nere, hon kommer vara på jobbet en timma för tidigt, Hon måste städa för Dans mamma kommer (Q5)
- infer that there is a slight possibility that Alexandra could change her mind regarding getting a lift to work if Dan’s mum does not come to dinner as that would mean that Alexandra wouldn’t need to stay at home and clean first in the morning (Q5)
- provide reasons why John has mixed positive and negative views regarding the TV series and ‘hobby archaeologists’. These students were able to identify that John blames the TV series for damaged artefacts. However, he also acknowledges that the increased interest in archaeology due to the TV series may result in more people enrolling in archaeology courses and this may result in more government funding (Q6).
Areas for students to improve include:
- addressing the key words in a question, for example, ‘why’, ‘explain’, ‘how likely’, ‘justify your answer’.
Reading and Responding
Part A
Students should:
- read the title, questions and the whole text before responding
- use only the lines or space beneath the question for the response
- support their responses with reference to content and language, using their own words
- be succinct in their responses, addressing the relevant details required by the question and avoiding repetition
- focus on key words in the question, for example, ‘how’, ‘why’, ‘explain’, ‘justify’ and respond in relation to the context of the text
- read the whole text to demonstrate understanding of relevant information and ideas
- identify the key issue(s) and provide examples to substantiate their response when asked to analyse or evaluate information
- draw a conclusion or justify a point of view using their own words
- provide a succinct response of main points or ideas when asked to summarise
- avoid providing a literal translation of text
- use the dictionary appropriately to find the correct meaning of the word(s) or expressions in context.
In better responses, students were able to:
- include all the reasons why the author thinks the TV series may appeal to a younger audience. For example, age discrimination, mental health, work/ life balance, including that Jessica is great actress and her career ambition is inspirational, motivational and interesting for a younger audience (Q7b)
- compare the arguments of both writers using their own words rather than copying expressions from the texts in their response (Q8)
- compare the authors’ opinions about, for example, the setting, storyline and main actress of the French TV series, and include similarities as well as differences in opinions (Q8)
- refer to the language techniques that the authors used to express their opinions, for example, rhetorical questions, commands, puns, adjectives and persuasive language (Q8).
Areas for students to improve include:
- using their own words in their response
- avoiding listing authors’ opinions without comparing them (Q8)
- focusing on the authors’ opinions, rather than summarising both reviews (Q8).
Part B
Students should:
- respond to the question asked in relation to the text
- read the entire text in order to respond fully to the question
- use the conventions of the type of text required by the question
- demonstrate understanding of the whole text in their response and not just respond to questions asked in the text
- focus on all relevant information and key points raised in the text in order to respond to comments made, requests for advice, issues discussed, and observations made
- use the appropriate register throughout the response
- provide a creative and authentic response in relation to the text and question
- use a variety of vocabulary and expressions and a range of grammatical structures
- plan effectively to organise their thoughts, paying attention to purpose, audience, context and the type of text required in the question
- edit their work to ensure clarity of the response.
In better responses, students were able to:
- give creative, constructive and authentic advice to Kelly. For example, jag var precis i samma situation, gå till biblioteket, plugga med kompisar, använd en kalender
- respond to all issues/problems mentioned by Kelly such as house chores, the importance of balancing work/money, how to spend the money she has earned, relationships with her mum and friends, fatigue, confusion and mental health
- use conditionals correctly and creatively, for example, om jag visste, skulle jag ha …
- use an appropriate less formal style for an online forum, for example, tjena!
- conclude in a personal way lycka till, hoppas att detta hjälper dig
- use suitable vocabulary for talking about work, such as arbetsplats, chef, lön,
“tjäna pengar - use appropriate vocabulary to advise, such as råd, rekommendationer, knep, tips.
Areas for students to improve include:
- using register for an online forum chat instead of using formal expressions such as jag skulle uppmana dig,jag skriver i respons till…,med vanliga halsningar
- concluding appropriately
- giving advice on all of Kelly’s concerns.
Writing in Swedish
Students should:
- read the question carefully and address all parts of the question
- plan their response to ensure a clear structure and sequence
- use the appropriate register and conventions of the type of text required
- commence and conclude appropriately
- manipulate the language to suit the requirements of the task
- use a variety of tenses, phrases and structures appropriate to the requirements of the question
- use the dictionary effectively by selecting vocabulary to suit the context
- proofread and edit their work
- adhere to the suggested word length.
In better responses, students were able to:
- structure their response using the conventions of an article (Q10)
- use appropriate language and linking words to compare Sweden and Australia as a tourist destination, for example, en uppenbar skillnad är…, medan Sverige å andra sidan…, I jämforelse med Sverige…, en av de största skillnaderna är … (Q10)
- use expressive language and appropriate adjectives to attract, persuade, entertain the readers of the article, for example, den kristallvita snön, det fantastiska norrskenet, det kryllar av restaurangar (Q10)
- compose a story focusing on living in the future with technology and include creative ideas about how technology in the future would affect daily life (Q11)
- use detailed and creative descriptions, for example, en gråfärgad varelse i detail, ögonen är kolsvarta, han blev plötsligt illamående (Q11)
- use colloquial Swedish language when suitable, for example, bränna pengar (Q11)
- include elements of a short story, such as an introduction that sets the scene När Niklas vaknade den morgonen kändes allt fel, dialogue if appropriate, for example, God morgon, sa roboten, characters and their inner thoughts, for example, det kanske bara är jag som är lat, a clear and exciting storyline and possibly an unexpected ending or twist, for example, jag ångrar att jag omprogrammerade robotarna (Q11).
Areas for students to improve include:
- avoiding listing information about Sweden and Australia instead of writing an article comparing the two countries as tourist destinations (Q10)
- including creative elements and a storyline for a short story instead of writing a reflection on technology in the future (Q11)
- avoiding ‘Swenglish’ expressions or direct translations from English to Swedish such as ögonen som njuter sig
- using the correct tense for describing present, past and future experiences
- revising word order and correct declension/inflection of adjectives, for example, en framtid ar styrda should be framtiden ar styrd av
- using the correct conventions for an article (Q10)
- taking a more objective stance when writing an article and avoiding overusing 1st person jag too (Q10)
- focusing and referencing technology and the future rather than talking about personal feelings (Q11)
- avoiding writing a story on technology and the future as an article rather that a creative piece of writing (Q11).
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