Ancient History 2017 HSC exam pack (archive)
2017 Ancient History HSC exam paper
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Section I
Students should:
- ensure they refer to the sources provided
- demonstrate their own knowledge as well as use the source(s)
- plan their responses
- use the lines provided as a guide to the length of response required
- keep up with developments at the sites which are used in responses.
Students should expect:
- questions from a range of areas in the syllabus
- to be able to integrate the sources into their response.
Students can prepare for this exam by:
- preparing for questions from all areas of the syllabus
- considering past HSC questions and determining what is required for each key word
- avoiding the use of prepared responses.
Section II, III and IV
Students should:
- be prepared to respond to questions from any part of the syllabus
- be able to use sources and evidence to support their responses
- directly answer the question
- address the key words, for example, ‘describe’, ‘explain’, ‘assess’ or ‘to what extent’
- use the question value and space provided as a guide to the expected length of a response.
Students can prepare for this examination by:
- using past HSC examination papers and their marking guidelines to practise responses
- writing plans for answers to questions in past HSC papers
- using the syllabus points as a guide for study and being prepared to integrate relevant information from across a number of points in a response, not just one
- practising writing timed responses so they can complete the paper in the given time
- revising historical terms, concepts and vocabulary.
In better responses, students were able to:
- directly answer the question directive and content in a sustained manner
- refer to relevant information or issues using detailed knowledge
- include sources, ancient and modern, where required, to support response
- demonstrate a detailed understanding of the topic.
Questions 6 and 7
In better responses, students were able to:
- make effective use of the sources provided
- identify the source specifically and refer to other examples of Egyptian inspired art and architecture
- refer to the influence of Egyptian religion and give specific examples of evidence
- provide detailed and accurate information about political life and integrate the source provided into their response
- link the sources provided with their own knowledge, for example, discussing electoral graffiti or the role of women in political life.
Question 8
In better responses, students were able to:
- provide a structured response which included a range of examples
- write succinctly
- engage with both sources
- use the sources as a stimulus to integrate their own knowledge
- link tourism with conservation.
In better responses, students were able to:
- name a feature, as required, rather than writing a description (part (a))
- focus on drawing a direct conclusion about the ‘importance’ of a feature rather than describing or explaining it (part (b))
- select a range of relevant features of the society and clearly show how these are part of ‘cultural life’
- focus on evidence from written and/or archaeological sources to support their response
- directly use the source provided to link to an aspect of cultural life which was then expanded upon with their own knowledge.
In better responses, students were able to:
- balance the length of the response to the mark values (part (a) and part (b))
- provide information on each aspect raised by the question, if more than one (part (a))
- use sources to provide information on the question, rather than simply naming a source (part (a))
- make clear judgements showing a range of ideas – not simply all positive (part (b))
- clearly focus on ‘influence’ and ‘on their time’
- directly use the quote at least once as a link to ‘influence’ and then expand upon this using their own knowledge
- not allow the quote to distract them from answering the actual question
- identify other ancient and/or modern sources explicitly and use ‘Plutarch tells us’ or ‘the relief depicting’ or ‘The Temple of Karnak’, rather than simply stating ‘ancient writers’ or ‘buildings, monuments and reliefs’
- use these sources as evidence to answer the question (part (b)).
In better responses, students were able to:
- take the time to consider the full potential or scope of the question
- understand the question in relation to all the relevant syllabus content
- have an accurate understanding of key words, for example, Q32 and Q33 ask about ‘prominent officials’ but many students wrote about pharaohs
- write a clear introduction that sets out a thesis statement
- address relevant issues logically throughout the response in paragraphs
- maintain clear links back to the question in each paragraph
- identify a range of judgements in relation to the question or ‘extent’
- refer to specific information and detailed knowledge throughout
- use historical terms, concepts and language
- use sources, ancient and modern, to support and develop their judgements
- write a conclusion that relates to the argument identified in the introduction.
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